i have to say well done with the animation and story but for me it was a little to much dialogue this time. It seemed to drag on a bit for me. other then that excellent. ill give it a 5
thanks, I was a little worried after watching it myself, and showing it to others that it dragged on a bit. I could probably make do cutting some dialogue here and there. #3 won't have half as much dialogue. Edit 7/22/08 : check out episode 3 tell me what you think.
I really cant say much but second all of the comments below mine. It was brilliantly animated with very few signs that it was done in flash. Incredible!!! And yes very nickelodeony. BUt i guess we should call it Krystally. You are a true talent and a blessing to the flash world well done
i didn't mind this too much except like the person bellow me i think that all though the music sounds good it just didn't fit in with the theme.
also the animation was a bit offtrack at some points, like the trees were very strangely drawn and i didn't really like that but then again thats just me.
Good drawing of the wlf though and godd expression of emotions.
I actually got a comment once on another site about the backgrounds. I'm not much of a background artist, if that isn't obvious, hah. But hey, thank you for pointing it out nonetheless and thank you for the review. There's always room for improvement.
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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars July 9, 2008
pretty good
i have to say well done with the animation and story but for me it was a little to much dialogue this time. It seemed to drag on a bit for me. other then that excellent. ill give it a 5
thanks, I was a little worried after watching it myself, and showing it to others that it dragged on a bit. I could probably make do cutting some dialogue here and there. #3 won't have half as much dialogue. Edit 7/22/08 : check out episode 3 tell me what you think.
Rated 5 / 5 stars June 27, 2008
omg brilliant
I really cant say much but second all of the comments below mine. It was brilliantly animated with very few signs that it was done in flash. Incredible!!! And yes very nickelodeony. BUt i guess we should call it Krystally. You are a true talent and a blessing to the flash world well done
Daww.. well from now on I'm going to refer to my art style as "Krystally", thanks! :D
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars June 21, 2008
it was alright
i didn't mind this too much except like the person bellow me i think that all though the music sounds good it just didn't fit in with the theme.
also the animation was a bit offtrack at some points, like the trees were very strangely drawn and i didn't really like that but then again thats just me.
Good drawing of the wlf though and godd expression of emotions.
I actually got a comment once on another site about the backgrounds. I'm not much of a background artist, if that isn't obvious, hah. But hey, thank you for pointing it out nonetheless and thank you for the review. There's always room for improvement.